Conference Day!

I had my conference this morning and it went really well! Ms. Dawson told me everything looked really well in my rough draft. I'm glad my experiences turned out sounding really good! Also she really liked my conclusion, she thought it was really strong and summed up my belief. My only problem is my introduction.. I guess I dont have enough of myself in it and you can't really get a good sense of how I feel about the subject until later on. Good thing I have the rest of the week and weekend to perfect my introduction before we have to turn it in!